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Aimless: Pedro

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Pedro! I had fun on his abs hahahaha

My major work. I called it 'Aimless' and made up some bullshit about not knowing what to do with our lives... and painted myself and all my ocs!


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Pedro (c) me

:bulletorange: Pedro is a gay demon. I haven't drawn his horns or wings here. He's childish and likes to flop all over his lover Kostya, and acts a bit like a friendly cat i guess

Medium: Copic markers and watercolor paints on cartridge paper

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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Impact

I adore the choice of color here, the colors on the person seem to blend in with the rest of the picture (Although the colors are a bit too neon for my taste), which I think is one of the most important factors on deciding if a deviation could be considered 'good' or 'not good.' (If such factors even exist in an artistic community, we as artists tend to consider all art as amusing, don't we? : D)
Now one thing I'd like to critique on is the anatomy here. The head seems to be too largely scaled for the rest of the body and the facial proportions are a bit off, as in the ear is a bit too large, etc. I know the type of earring he is wearing in the picture stretches one's earlobe, but I don't think his earlobe would be connected to his face- unless his earlobes are attached to his face because of genetics.
I also think the anatomy on the body is quite off. The muscle placement etc. The way you've drawn the hip bone makes him seem like he's been obviously placed on his lower body and he can be easily taken off (??) I'm not sure if I made myself clear right there.
If you're going for the more anime look, which I think you have, then I'd say the jaw is looking pretty good, but if this was meant to be realistic, the jaw shape should be a bit more round and the jaw should be longer, no?
As for the hand, the metacarpals are way too long according to the rest of the hand.
Here are some hand references;
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Now here are some great references on anatomy; [link] , I've found it very helpful.
I hope this helps you improve. Keep drawing!