HAPPY ANNIVERSARY

Thematically, I like the piece. There is something creepily batshit insane about it that tickles me in the right sorts of ways. The idea of someone smiling lovingly while tearing their own heart out for you is playfully appropriate to this sort of art in ways that I don't think most artists I see even try, much less capture well. The look we have in the femme's face is just about right for a combination of insane and anemia from blood loss.

Technical notes: You might extend her upper arm a bit higher in future. Her shoulders are very large. The pinkies also seem a teensy bit too long, given that the pinky generally comes to the ring second knuckle. However, I don't know that the intention here is anatomical correctness so much as the playful themes involved. In some way, this is a piece that doesn't live and die on its technical merits so much as the imagery it's toying with and the sentiments behind it. If I'm reading them right, I think you did a good job capturing those.